the wizards of Imagi.... HELP!!

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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 1:50 am

Ok, so, I started my book in November and have had a really good time writing it, but now I'm stuck... I might be able to work my way out of it, but it might help if I had a few suggestions... You know, some help... Please?

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:50 pm

Help? I can help! Pick me! memememememememememememememememe!!!

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:50 pm

hmmm.... the... person in the back?

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:52 pm

YES!!! So what part are you stuck on?

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:56 pm

um, transition to the next chapter. I have an idea for later on in the story, but I cant figure out what comes before that...

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 4:59 pm

Leaving the ends of chapters at a cliffhanger always makes the reader want to continue reading. They wanna know what happens next!

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:15 pm

As a reader, I know how that feels! I left it with a small cliffhanger, enough to keep them interested, but not to much so they won't get to upset at me...but now I'm stuck..


(sometimes leaving big cliffhangers is awesome though! Who cares if the readers get mad? There's a whole other chapter for them to read after their tantrum. That's what writing is all about! To help people feel emotion!)

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:17 pm

Is it beginning the next chapter that's got you stuck, or leading up to the cliffhanger?

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:17 pm

Beginning of the next chapter...

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:23 pm

Ah. Well, what is the end of the previous chapter? Usually, I'd just write on through thinking it wasn't separated from the previous chapter (though it is).
Example:
blah blah blah...
And that's when Caroline saw the thing she feared the most!
Chapter 8943
Standing in front of the small six year old girl was a monstrous rainbow colored clown!!!
blah blah blah...

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:32 pm

Well, it's sort of set up so that the story continues later on, possibly later that week...

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:47 pm

I get it. So being telling that story then. Does someone wake up? Because if so, you should probably start with that person waking up. Or perhaps you could start it off humorously. Like a conversation where people are getting mad at one another because of a silly problem. Then once you get that out of the way, you can begin to explain some of the things that went on that week.

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 5:58 pm

oh, ok... So, Erik has been nodding off, and as he jerks himself awake once again, he reflects upon the week, not only showing why he's so dang tired, but also what has been going on!

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Aug 06, 2014 6:18 pm

Perfect! Did I help you out of your writer's block?

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Aug 06, 2014 9:46 pm

Im going to say maybe, because I haven't Actually written yet...

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by Author of the Universe on Thu Aug 07, 2014 1:46 pm

OMG THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU!!!!!!

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


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~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by Author of the Universe on Tue Sep 09, 2014 9:05 pm

... great... I wrote myself into another block... HELP!!! I HAVE ALMOST NO MOTIVATION TO WRITE ANYMORE!!! meh...

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


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When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Sep 10, 2014 3:46 pm

Alright, what are ya stuck on now?

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Wed Sep 10, 2014 4:08 pm

well, I moved on to the next chapter because I couldn't figure out where I was going in the last chapter, but I need help deciding if it would just be for the better if I deleted that one "chapter"... I can show it to you if you'd like so that you can help me decide... Smile

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


"I'm not here to fight you, I'm here to violently kill you!"
~Captain Hitsugya, Bleach


When life gives you lemons, make apple juice

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Post by jesswrightica on Wed Sep 10, 2014 6:07 pm

Sure! That would be fantastic.
Very Happy

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


THIS IS ASH THE AWESOME TALKING!!!



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Post by Author of the Universe on Thu Sep 11, 2014 2:08 am

k, here it is!
Julia swirled around in perfect spins, almost like a dance, but far more deadly because instead of ribbons in her hands, she had knifes. Still, it was beautiful to watch- but from a safe distance. Julia had been working on her weapon skills, finding the rhythm of it soothing and beautiful.
Will was watching her from the safe distance, mouth hanging open in aw. Will knew he was good, but he paled in comparison to Julia. Once she found her rhythm, Will had a very hard time keeping up, let alone staying up! They used to spar with each other, but that quickly died away as soon as Will had to heal himself almost nightly.
I just don't know where to go with it and it seems to be irrelevant, but I was wondering if there would be any way to make the time I spent writing it worth while... Smile

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


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Post by jesswrightica on Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:49 pm

Well, I think it's an important part of the story. It illustrates the relationship between Will and Julia. So Why is Julia dancing at that moment? Are they being attacked? Are they just practicing? If they are being attacked, describe some more elements of the battle. If Julia is just practicing, then you could add some dialog between her and Will.

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The electricity in my head seemed to jump to my eyes, causing the whole room to look like it was filled with electrical energy. My lungs were soon filled with the electricity, also my hands, feet, and heart!
Markus's Powers:
1. Electrical healing with his hands. Only can seal up wounds though, not magical healthy thing.
2. Can see electrical currents.
3. Can withstand electrical shocks. it makes him stronger.
4. Runs super fast. Gets tired when a lot of electricity is used.
5. Plasma ball from his mouth. Takes him a while to charge up though.
6. Can discharge electricity from any part of his body.


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Post by Author of the Universe on Fri Sep 12, 2014 10:00 am

huh...that's a good idea! thanks! and fyi, she's just practicing Very Happy

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It’s not like I was looking for 
trouble. I didn’t have to. At my height it just always found me. 
My name is Michael Vey, and the story I’m about to tell you is 
strange. Very strange. It’s my story.


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