Re: Handwritten

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:52 pm

I don't really want to do an author name... or something to do with writing... my musical side is my musical side, and even though it connects firmly with my author side, it's very different.

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:54 pm

It sounds familiar, sorry. And that's alright!

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:55 pm

Silent Yell...

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:56 pm

No... not that...

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:57 pm

Crimson Words?

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:58 pm

Too different from the music.

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 7:59 pm

To the Fro? (I know these are random... welcome to my head...)

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:01 pm

I laughed! Maybe I would type some of the lyrics I've been working on.

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:02 pm

I could type some of mine... if you want... I'd like to hear yours...

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:08 pm

That'd be nice. Here it is!

Here we are
Looking down
Standing so tall
Staring at the ground

After so long
Working so hard
By staying together
We have risen

We have risen
We deserve our place
No one's going to tell us otherwise

We're keeping up the beat!
That steady strong vibe
That we all like

We're never gonna die out
That's what we're all about
Staying strong in the storm

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:15 pm

Here's some of mine from Made to be Crazy.

I just gotta have my life be crazy all the time, who-o-oah!
I can't live without the ting that helps me to survive, who-o-oah!
There's a burnign deep, way deeep inside of you! And how it burns -- it burns so bright. I will tell you its name, this over-bright fire! I'll tell you its -- tell you its name!
Oh, that fire inside, oh it's your soul! You gotta let it out!
Life's not fun if it's not everywhere every moment all the time!
You can't live if youd don't let yourself live a little every day!
(That's about as far as I got on that one...)

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:16 pm

That's not bad, that pretty good, but can use the slightest bit tweaking with the lyrics.

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:18 pm

Oh? Care to provide the tweaks?
(I thought the same thing with yours... it's pretty good, though...)

by **Dean Winchester** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:20 pm

I almost just tripped down my stairs...

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:21 pm

I'll tell you if you tell me. The "whoa's" are a little too much. Good for backup singers, though!

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:24 pm

I think you might think differently if you heard me sing it... and yours... actually -- it's a great song, so don't take offense -- I couldn't do it without re-writing the whole song. It's a bit dark, and a tiny bit archaic.

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:27 pm

It's okay! I can have a good shield for the half part.

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:38 pm

Okay... so, your critique? If it's doable here...

by **Dean Winchester** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:38 pm

I'm writing a song now... MOSTLY BECAUSE I AM NOT IN A GOOD MOOD AND IT IS WORKING TO GET OUT MY ANGER

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:39 pm

You want to email me, Staci?

by **Dean Winchester** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:39 pm

Sure.

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:39 pm

... What do you mean? The "Whoa's" were it! Other than that, it was epic!

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:40 pm

Just the "Whoas"? Really? Okay. That's good, I suppose... the song wouldn't really work without the "whoas," though.

by **Queen Reyna Arellano** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:41 pm

It's okay! It's a small thing that doesn't really need changing!

by **The Guardian** Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:43 pm

Okay... I think it'd be interesting to hear you sing your song... I'd make a video of mine, but I don't have a camera.

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